Kourin no Miko's Shrine to Fushigi Yuugi
Byakko: She wants to majiwaru with a 7-year old girl? =O_O=
exactly sure whether this page nominated itself, or whether it was
just Seiryuu's overflowing good will that brought this page to our
attention. Well, let's see what's going on here. =^_^=
Trial One - Two : Yipe. Nothing quite like a blasting
MIDI to clear the sinuses. On a PC, I could find a stop, but on a Mac,
it was sheer torture. Midis are an overused, and often misused,
feature. Especially the OP. Haven't we *heard* the OP enough? =;;~_~=
Trial Three - okay, let's see what we have here...ooh,
Well, there's no LACK of information...now let's start at the
- Bishounen List
- Image Gallery
- Series Summary
- Link Me
- About Me
- Other Images
- Other Stuff
- Tamahome, Chichiri, Nuriko, and Tasuki Shrines
YKYWTMFYW... ( You Know You Watch Too Much FY When..)
er...*shrug* Not much to say here. It's an old idea, but at least the
reasons appear to be new. Nice BG, too.
Bishounen List - nothing much to say about this except to mention
the broken links. ;;=^_^=
Gallery - Ah, good. All on her own server space, text
links...this is good.
Fanfiction - original
fanfiction, nice BG. No problems here, either.
Character Profiles - split these up on separate pages. And if
the pictures no longer work..they should have been put on your own
server space in the first place. =^_-= The character profiles
themselves seem to fine. It's just that a lot of the BG on these pages are overpowering to the text.
Series Summary - yipe! The BG is too strong! Can't...read...text! Other than that, it's fine.
Link to Me - same problem with the BG and text. =-_-=
Other Images - Wai~ Originality! Manga scans and akugi. =^_^= But...the BG...and one akugi, many akugi. Minna-san, in Japanese, you do NOT add an "s" to indicate a plural. It's like with 'fish'. Or 'sheep'. So there are no such things as
"seishis" or "mikos" ( although this is more forgivable =^_^= ) or "Shinzahos" or whatnot. Nope!
Shrines - Whoa whoa whoa! Hold on here. We've got some problems, Houston. First of all, wrong info. "Sukunami Taka", for one thing....Hmm. These sorts of mistakes are repeated on the other "shrines." Please, if you're going to make shrines, minna-san, CHECK YOUR FACTS. Chichiri's name is "Houjun", for example. And there are massive spoilers on that page
re: Chichiri's past. It's also pretty hard to read the shrine text over the different BG's.
Ara ara, okay, let's try and sum things up here. First of all, we've got a major BG problem. The main page BG is good - it's faint and doesn't overpower the text. But a lot of the sub-pages are near-impossible to read. Tone down the BG.
There's some inaccurate info running about. Please fix that.
The MIDI. Aiya~~ I think that MIDIs are an unneccessary evil. At least this one has controls. ;;=^_^=
In short, this page is...decent for a starting page. However, it's got some serious stylistic and coding problems to work through before it'll be a truly nice FY page. It's fairly average, then, I guess. =^_^= But I hope the tips I've given will be of some help to the webmaster! <